A Mistaken Marraige Match 4: Pirate’s Daughter Volume III Chapter 87 Love Rivals Part 2

 Spent my weekend doing this chapter. Enjoy!

A Mistaken Marriage Match 4: Pirate’s Daughter by Qian Lu 錯嫁良緣續之海盜千金 作者:淺綠

Volume III Chapter 87  Part 2 Love Rivals 

 Su Su could feel a vision looking at her from the moment she stepped into the courtyard. She was being closely watched and observed by Tan Tai Feng. She turned and gave a generous smile, “ Su Su greets General Tan Tai.”

Tan Tai Feng’s eagle-like eyes slightly squinted and the corner of his mouth has the trace of a gentle smile before nodding towards her, “ I have known your father for many years. Call me Uncle Tan Tai will be nice.  As expected, ‘with a distinguished father such as you, an offspring is sure to do well**’. I heard that you were in Huan Lang Island and that Tan Tai Ye Lie loses out to you. Su Ling, having a daughter as you; surely he’s living his life with no regrets. ”

**hǔ fù wú quǎnz- lit. father is a lion, a son cannot be a dog(honorific); With a distinguished father such as you, the son is sure to do well;  like fatherlike son

Su  Su  calmly smiled at the mention of the Huan Lang Island, replied with confidence, “ Uncle Tan Tai your praise is excessive, as, for the battle in Huang Lang Island, Ye Lie did not go all out, his few small coordinated moves are just for laughs.”

Tan Tai Feng was still smiling but his heart was actually secretly sighing. This only daughter of Su Ling doesn’t know fear. She is only 16 or 17 but her martial arts skill is not weak. Her attitude could be proud but not one degree arrogant, seems to be humble but also not humble, modest but not inferior, rightly so she knew when to retreat or advance, her every movement could gather all the great and influential families, even the Young Master Mo, their relationship not common, if Su and Mo families come together in marriage …oh no…no way. Not by any means! 

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Volume III Chapter 87 Part 2 Love Rivals

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6 thoughts on “A Mistaken Marraige Match 4: Pirate’s Daughter Volume III Chapter 87 Love Rivals Part 2

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  2. This is very interesting 🙂
    Thank you very much for the translations and the chapters 😀 ☺♥☺☺♥☺

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  3. Hey translator, you really should learn the difference between past tense and present tense. It’s completely screwing up every single chapter you’ve ever translated. It’s a huge basic of the English language if I’m being honest.

    “She is being closely watched and observed by Tan Tai Feng. She turned and gave a generous smile,”

    You use BOTH the past tense and present tense. Stay away from the present tense. It should be..

    “She WAS being closely watched and observed by Tan Tai Feng. She turned and gave a generous smile,”

    Same for this sentence.

    “Tan Tai Feng’s eagle-like eyes slightly squinted and the corner of his mouth has the trace of a gentle smile before nodding towards her.”

    Once again you combine both past tense and present tense, making the sentence make no sense at all. It should be..

    “Tan Tai Feng’s eagle-like eyes slightly squinted and the corner of his mouth HAD the trace of a gentle smile before nodding towards her.”

    See what I’m getting at? Unless it’s a character speaking SPECIFICALLY in present tense, always write in past tense. Was, Were, Had, Did, Ran, Walked. Not Is, Does, Runs, Walks. That’s present tense and shouldn’t be used.

    I can absolutely promise you that fixing this one constant error you keep making will raise all of your translation by one star, if we’re going off the five star system. Take it seriously if you want to improve both as a translator and in the English language itself.

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    • Hey also, do you want to volunteer as an editor? Give me your email address and I can give you an invitation. Because I care less about my grammar. My purpose is just to translate to the point I could understand the story. If it bothers you, you are welcome as a volunteer editor.

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  5. Ty for the chapter. Su su should really just stay away from the tan tai group. Rather than a love rival, ye lie just simply the eyesore antagonist and the father is a significant threat.

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